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The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004. g8yD3
The tabular chart depicts the production of oil on daily basis in ( Nigeria, Chad, congo, and Somalia) from 2000 and 2004. Overview, the congo, and Nigeria produce the highest number of oil barrels and lowest was accounted in chad and Somalia however, the congo shows a declining trend whereas, other nation numbers rose steadily in four years. After having a keen observation from given data, it is vivid that, In 2002, the condo elicited 2, 75, 000 barrels of oil per day whereas, 70 barrels less produced in Nigeria(2, 50, 000). However, condo figures was decreased and Nigeria follow the same treand for just two years and incline steadily over the period. Probing further to other countries, the chad did not originate a single barrel for 3 years but, In 2003, the nation pumped out 8, 000 thousand containers and dramatically increase their production figure next year, at 50, 000 furthermore, Somalia initiated from 5000 barrels on a typical day, however, over the next four year, the counting rose to 10 times, by 50, 000 oil container.
The tabular chart depicts the production of
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oil
on daily basis in
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(
Nigeria, Chad,
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congo
, and Somalia)
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from 2000 and 2004
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Overview, the
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congo
, and Nigeria produce the highest number of
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oil
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barrels
and lowest
was accounted
in chad and Somalia
however
, the
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congo
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shows
a declining trend whereas, other nation numbers rose
steadily
in four years.

After having a keen observation from
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given
data, it is vivid that, In 2002, the condo elicited 2, 75, 000
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barrels
of
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oil
per day whereas, 70
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barrels
less produced in Nigeria(2, 50, 000).
However
, condo figures
was decreased
and Nigeria follow the same
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treand
for
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two years and incline
steadily
over the period.

Probing
further
to other countries, the chad did not originate a single
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barrel
for 3 years
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but
, In 2003, the nation pumped out 8, 000 thousand containers and
dramatically
increase their production figure
next
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year
, at 50, 000
furthermore
, Somalia initiated from 5000
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barrels
on a typical day,
however
, over the
next
four
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year
, the counting rose to 10 times, by 50, 000
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oil
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IELTS essay The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

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