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Everythings about my favourite job

Everythings about my favourite job BWml5

Everyone has a favorite job for yourself and me too, I like tourims and I think if i wants my dream job come true, I should study hard. English has an important role for my tourims also all works so I think study english and improve my skills is a priority, The second I need to finish at high school and choose a best university to study. I have never do that job but I think it very hard and busy because you need friendly, smile with everyone in any case althrough you are tired or you can not spend your time to hang out with friends, take care for your family and may be you should get some habbits such as: stay up late, not eat enough. . . so i think become a tour guide maybe not good for my health. But I can earn a lot of money, go to everywhere and exchange with all people in the world or have knowledge of cultures and customs that is my reason to want become a tour guide. How about you?

Everyone has a favorite job for yourself and me too, I like Possible spelling mistake found.tourism
tourims
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think
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come
 true, I should study This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
. English has an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role for my Possible spelling mistake found.tourism
tourims
also
 all works This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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think
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english
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 is a priority, The second I need to finish at high school and choose Use "the" with the superlative.the
a
 best university to study. I have never Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "done".done
do
 that job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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think
 it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 and busy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you need friendly, smile with everyone in any case Possible spelling mistake found.although
althrough
 you are tired
 or you can not spend your time to hang out with friends, take care for your family and Did you mean "maybe" (= perhaps)?maybe
may be
 you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible spelling mistake found.habitsrabbitshobbitswabbits
habbits
 such as: stay up late, not eat This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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Don't put a space before the full stop.
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 become a tour guide maybe not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for my health. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I can earn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 money, There isn't usually a preposition before "everywhere". Did you mean "go everywhere"?go everywhere
go to everywhere
 and exchange with all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the world or have knowledge of cultures and customs that is
 my reason to Probably a preposition is missing after 'want'.want to become
want become
 a tour guide. How about you? 