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government should more mony on railways then rorads .do you agrr or disagree?

government should more mony on railways then rorads. do you agrr or disagree? NBDj

there is no doubt that transportation system has been changed since many ages thats why some echelons of the society reckon that more railways should be constrcted rather than spending money on roasds. my views are with synchronisation school of thought. tfirstly, traffic congestion and problem of environment can be mitigated by adopting new railway roads because many number of people and many goods can be transferred by single train which not only reduce the cost of products and also perserve a time while a rush can be obsereved on roads at peak hours in the morning and evening by using railways it may solve automattically.

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