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government should make free medical and education facilities

government should make free medical and education facilities Wyn9e

In recent past, some people believe that education and medical facilities should be provided by the government while other believe that people should pay these expenditures themselves to support country. In my opinion, these facilities should not be free and in this essay, I will propose logical example for the same. On one hand, government generate revenue from each and every product sold in the market. Employee have to pay taxes from their salary and often these taxes are high. For example, my father is a government employee and he have to pay different kind of taxes to the government such as central and state government tax. Earlier, there was transparency of the fund collected but in recent times it has changed. Moreover, the revenue created is quite large and can be used to capitalized healthcare and education fees. On the other hand, to maintain a good and prosperous economy government should have enough funds and by providing free facilities it will cost the government a ton load of money. It can get collapse if not managed well. For instance, in Nigeria the government tried to implement this kind of scheme which was intended to provide basic amenities, however, the government was not able to sustain with such work load and money pressure. Furthermore, government have to maintain a balance in in allocating its funds such as to fund the military and to invest in new technology. To encapsulate, it seems logical to demand healthcare and education for public at free of cost but government have to work for other aspects of the country as well.

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some
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people
 believe that education and medical facilities should be provided
 by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 while other believe that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 should pay these expenditures themselves to support country. In my opinion, these facilities should not be free and in this essay, I will propose logical example for the same.

On one hand, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 generate revenue from each and every product sold in the market. Employee This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
taxes
 from their salary and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
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taxes
 are high. For example
, my father is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
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have
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different
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taxes
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 such as central and state You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
tax
. Earlier, there was transparency of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoundationsupplycapitaltreasurytrustendowment
fund
 collected This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in recent times it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. Moreover
, the revenue created is quite large and can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to capitalized healthcare and education fees.

On the other hand
, to maintain a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and prosperous economy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 should have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 funds and by providing free facilities it will cost the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 a ton load of money. It can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 collapse if not managed well. For instance
, in Nigeria the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 tried to implement this kind of scheme which was intended
 to provide basic amenities, however
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 was not able to sustain with such work load and money pressure. Furthermore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 maintain a balance Possible typo: you repeated a wordin
in in
 allocating its funds such as to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoundationsupplycapitaltreasurytrustendowment
fund
 the military and to invest in new technology.

To encapsulate, it seems logical to demand healthcare and education for public at free of cost This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 work for other aspects of the country as well
. 