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Government should close using mobile. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion?

Government should close using mobile. Give your opinion? lxoEQ
It is undeniable that regime ought to ban the use of mobile phones. I partially agreed with this statement and there are various reasons in upcoming paragraphs. Admittedly, there are distinct type of perspective to glimpse this. The first reason is that higher authorities should close the use of mobile phones because offsprings using internet too much on daily basis in today's time. To be more precise, children neglecting their studies in sake of wasting time on internet. Pupils taking too much interest in mobile than other beneficial works. The another second clear reason is that there are some illegal and bad contents on social media. For illustration, dwellers are attracting easily to these bad contents instead of useful manner. For example, there is a trend among teenagers to make girlfriends and seeing bad contents with privacy in modern era. And it affect the one in very bad manner. So, regimes should close using mobile phones. In another hand, higher authorities should not ban the mobile phones because mobiles are made for saving time in today's busy life. In easy words, mobile phones are very helpful to complete daily works in very short period of time. Another reason is that it is best and easy source of collecting information about any corner of world. One can easily get knowledge about advancement of technology. And it also helps in preserving time. It also help in time managing. For example, if one want to get admission in a university but the university is situated on a long distance. So, one can easily get information about that university with the help of mobile phone instead of travelling a far distance to reach there. Therefore, government should not close the use of mobile phones. In conclusion, there is a high stand at first view. But the second view also have strong point. So, according to my opinion, i partially agreed with this statement.
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use
of mobile
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phones
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with this statement and there are various
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in upcoming paragraphs.
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, there are distinct type of perspective to glimpse this. The
first
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reason
is that higher authorities should close the
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use
of mobile
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phones
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because
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offsprings
using internet too much on daily basis in
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today
's
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time
. To be more precise, children neglecting their studies in sake of wasting
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time
on internet. Pupils taking too much interest in
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mobile
than other beneficial works. The another second
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reason
is that there are
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some
illegal and
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bad
contents on social media. For illustration, dwellers are attracting
easily
to these
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bad
contents
instead
of useful manner.
For example
, there is a trend among
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teenagers
to
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make
girlfriends and seeing
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bad
contents with privacy in modern era. And it
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affect
the one in
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bad
manner.
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So
, regimes should close using mobile
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phones
. In another hand, higher authorities should not ban the mobile
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phones
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because
mobiles
are made
for saving
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time
in
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today
's busy life. In easy words, mobile
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phones
are
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very
helpful to complete daily works in
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very
short period of
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time
. Another
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reason
is that it is best and easy source of collecting information about any corner of world. One can
easily
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get
knowledge about advancement of technology. And it
also
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helps
in preserving
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time
. It
also
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help
in
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time
managing.
For example
, if one want to
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get
admission in a university
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the university
is situated
on a long distance.
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, one can
easily
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get
information about that university with the
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help
of mobile
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phone
instead
of travelling a far distance to reach there.
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,
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government
should not close the
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use
of mobile
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phones
.
In conclusion
, there is a high stand at
first
view.
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the second view
also
have strong point.
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, according to my opinion,
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partially
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IELTS essay Government should close using mobile. Give your opinion?

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