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Some people think that robots are important for human's development.others contend that robots have negative effects on society.discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that robots are important for human's development. others contend that robots have negative effects on society. discuss both views and give your opinion 3gBrb
Development of masses others however think that robots can affect the society in a negative way in upcoming paragraph I will enunciate both peoples consideration as well as give my opinion that why I am strongly in the favour of development of robots. For upcoming years first and foremost is first space exploration to explain this if artificial intelligence robots will be used for space research scientist can see more present result also some mishappens can be ignored with the usage of robots. To be more precise, for researching on other planet's surfaces; using robots instead of humans can save the lives of astronauts. A paradigm can be a China who is using robotic astronauts despite of humans, have get desired results. The second reason is working in dangerous places, with these robots this; working in mines, number of labours died as a result of inhaling a carbon dioxide in a deep mining so if there will be availablity of such machines, accidents at that sites can be avoide. Owing to other people's opine of negative effect on the society due to development of robots, there are two main reasons, first is unemployment, if more works will be done by robots instead of masses jobs will be limited and therefore unemployment will be on its the plateau. Moving further, human designed artificial intelligence can be dangerous for survival of of mankind this is because they are softwares and are unaware of emotions. To explain this, they are in lack of feeling like a humanity and can be threat to humans future. A paradigm can be robot Dell who was used for operation in a specific army operation it revealed all secrets of his country to another nation, because that nation hacked him. so it can serve in negative way. To conclude, although there are some drawbacks of developing robots such as unemployment; the positive side, a boon for working in mines as well as space exploration never be forgotten.
Development of masses others
however
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think
that robots can affect the society in a
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negative
way in upcoming paragraph I will enunciate both peoples consideration
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as well as
give my opinion that why I am
strongly
in the
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favour
of development of robots. For upcoming years
first
and foremost is
first
space exploration to
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explain
this if artificial intelligence robots will be
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used
for space research scientist can
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see
more present result
also
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some
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mishappens
can be
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ignored
with the usage of robots. To be more precise, for researching on other planet's surfaces; using robots
instead
of
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humans
can save the
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lives
of astronauts. A paradigm can be a China who is using robotic astronauts
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despite of
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humans
, have
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get
desired results. The second reason is working in
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dangerous
places, with these robots this; working in mines, number of
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labours
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died
as a result
of inhaling a carbon dioxide in a deep mining
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so
if there will be
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availablity
of such machines, accidents at that sites can be
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avoide
. Owing to other
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people
's opine of
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negative
effect on the society due to development of robots, there are two main reasons,
first
is unemployment, if more works will
be done
by robots
instead
of masses jobs will
be limited
and
therefore
unemployment will be on
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its
the plateau. Moving
further
,
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human
designed artificial intelligence can be
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dangerous
for survival
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of of
mankind this is
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because
they are
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softwares
and are unaware of emotions. To
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explain
this, they are in lack of feeling like a humanity and can be threat to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
future. A paradigm can be robot Dell who was
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used
for operation in a specific army operation it revealed all secrets of his country to another nation,
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because
that nation hacked him.
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so
it can serve in
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negative
way.
To conclude
, although there are
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some
drawbacks of developing robots such as unemployment; the
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positive
side, a boon for working in mines
as well
as space exploration never
be forgotten
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that robots are important for human's development. others contend that robots have negative effects on society. discuss both views and give your opinion

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