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Government is the one to blame for unemployment

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It is clear that not updating the jobs trends of the government induces significantly mass unemployment. Due to the development of the Fourth Industrial Revolution, there are more and more up-to-date occupations that meet the market economy high requirements, which means all the obsolete jobs will soon disappear. In reality, in Viet Nam, there are just a few traditional motorbike taxi drivers now working because of the rapid popularity of technology motorbike taxi applications such as Grab, Uber. For that reason, if the government do not alter the labour market and improve policy to enforce good job security, many people whose jobs have not adapted to the changes of economic trends will surely be out of work. Consequently, these large numbers of unemployed people will become a burden impacting the countries’ socio-economic development.

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