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Government in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on food and beverage with high levels of sugar.some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Government in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on food and beverage with high levels of sugar. some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion GMrj2
It is generally seen that athourity promulgate taxes on special things. hence, it has become a considerable issue, whether taxes on eatable things and beverages are acceptable, or not. I will not only discuss my point of view, but also elaborate both given views in the upcoming paragraph. To begin with, introducing specific taxes are fruitful from some aspects. firstly, extra demand and supply of food can be mitigate, which further become a cause of obesity and overweight, if taxes will be imposed on food items and sweet drinks.
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athourity
promulgate
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taxes
on special things.
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hence
, it has become a considerable issue, whether
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taxes
on eatable things and beverages are acceptable, or not. I will not
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discuss my point of view,
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elaborate both
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views in the upcoming paragraph. To
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with, introducing specific
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taxes
are fruitful from
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aspects.
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firstly
, extra demand and supply of food can be
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mitigate
, which
further
become a cause of obesity and overweight, if
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taxes
will
be imposed
on food items and sweet drinks.
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IELTS essay Government in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on food and beverage with high levels of sugar. some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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