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Government are spend money in railway rather than road agree and disagree.

Government are spend money in railway rather than road agree and disagree. 2aDnw
Nowadays nation are suffering both condition due to the fact this time both are important rail line or course both reach us to the destination. I agree for authority should spend money or track rather than roadway. This is very conscious for community all individual wants to healthy and perfect lifestyle. Roads are very crowded and traffic jam. So, pollution in air quality is bad because of Michel and people rush. For instance, they are not breath properly. however, road too essential but I agree completely for ministry decision. First if ministry spend money on railway. Raising the economy because a million of people are travel in train. Further more benefits for government. In my opinion long distance travel is sufficient to rail line. It is transport can be cost effective. Can save 10-40 %train has Lower fuel costs compared to road transport. Trains are capable of halving large loads. One double stacked train can hold loads equal to 280 tracks. Secondly more convent track rather than road because all long distance journey is suitable for human. For instance I went massorie last week by bus it is very difficult for slepped and sit but yesterday I went mathura by caravan all facilities available and it's very safe.
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agree
for authority should spend money or
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rather
than roadway. This is
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conscious for community all individual wants to healthy and perfect lifestyle.
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Roads
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crowded and traffic jam.
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, pollution in air quality is
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bad
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because
of Michel and
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people
rush.
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.
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however
,
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road
too essential
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I
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agree
completely for ministry decision.
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if ministry spend money on railway. Raising the economy
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because
a million of
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people
are travel in
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train
.
Further
more benefits for
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government
. In my opinion long distance travel is sufficient to rail line. It is transport can
be cost
effective. Can save 10-40
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%train
has Lower fuel costs compared to
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road
transport.
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Trains
are capable of halving large loads. One double stacked
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train
can hold loads equal to 280
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tracks
.
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more convent
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track
rather
than
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road
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because
all long distance journey is suitable for human. For
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massorie
last week by bus it is
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difficult for
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IELTS essay Government are spend money in railway rather than road agree and disagree.

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