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elimination of physical education

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Many people assert that the elimination of physical education should be done to allot more time for academic subjects because such subject is time-wasting and ineffectual. However, this argument seems to be based on a false assumption due to its effectiveness for kid’s development. Indeed, not only is knowledge necessary but physical activities also play an essential role in maintaining and strengthening kid’s health. In addition, spending time only studying is not an effective learning method. Instead, kids should have time for knowledge acquisition and recharging their energy. This helps them to meditate on themselves and release stress before keeping on the study.

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 assert that the elimination of physical education should be done
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 such subject is time-wasting and ineffectual. However
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 physical activities also
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 studying is not an effective learning method. Instead
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 keeping on the study. 