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can you tell me about your dream

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When I was a child, I wanted travel to development countries to expend knowledge. After I enroll FPT university in oder to can practise my dream. I hope that I will finish my dream. I can communicate with all people in the world about navite culture, languages, national cuisine, . . . Besides, I can expand relationship, expand knowledge, have many new friends from countries around the world and have many job opportunities. . . After that, my friends, my families and I can get away from it all after a long time of hard work. In summary, my dream can be able to practise more easily when going to FPT university.

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