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Good roommates have four characteristics.

Good roommates have four characteristics. 5a82A

Good roommates have four characteristics. First of all, I think a neat and tidy friend is very important as I am a person who does not like clutter. Second, I think roommates should have a sense of humour, because then there will always be a happy atmosphere in the room and our relationship will become closer. I think a roommate should be someone who shares the housework because I won't have to do all the work, and doing so is also respectful of your roommate. Knowing that staying in the motel room will happen a lot of contradictions, in order to avoid those contradictions, we should take actions to not make others uncomfortable so we can live a long life together. Finally, Living with my friend saves me some money than living alone, but I think she always has to pay her rent on time.

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