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Gnaration story in class by group

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And now my daughter, this necklace has reached me from my grandmother and it reaches you from me. I hope you take care of it and remember that you should never separate it from yourself because your life becomes meaningless. This necklace may not be magical and has no supernatural power, but forever. It has been like this ti me and it has filled my life with luck. it is really what you needed in your life

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 my daughter, this necklace has reached me from my grandmother and it reaches you from me. I hope you take care of it and remember that you should never separate it from yourself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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IELTS essay Gnaration story in class by group

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

76 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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