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Gnaration story in class by group

Gnaration story in class by group 0lJKq
And now my daughter, this necklace has reached me from my grandmother and it reaches you from me. I hope you take care of it and remember that you should never separate it from yourself because your life becomes meaningless. This necklace may not be magical and has no supernatural power, but forever. It has been like this ti me and it has filled my life with luck. it is really what you needed in your life
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my daughter, this necklace has reached me from my grandmother and it reaches you from me. I hope you take care of it and remember that you should never separate it from yourself
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IELTS essay Gnaration story in class by group

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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