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bell hill farm from the year 1976 to 2006

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The picture here represents the information about how in three decades the variations had taken place in the farm of bell hill. From the overall perspective, it can be clearly seen that the name of the Bell Hill Farm was taken over by Environment Centre in the year 2006. At the first glance, it can be observed that the farmhouse and path remained unchanged for the year 2006 when in comparison to 1976. Further, it is depicted that the storage facilities for farm machinery was replaced by cars and in 2006 the parking meant for vehicles. The farm of corn was turned to multimedia room. Upon more observation it can observed that the farm yard confronting the farmhouse was being demolished and the new recreation area constructed. If we look at the picture more keenly, it can be contemplated that the place for cows and chickens was changed to student housing, where the accommodation services offered for the students.
The picture here represents the information about how in three decades the variations had taken place in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
farm
of bell hill.

From the
overall
perspective, it can be
clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that the name of the Bell Hill
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Farm
was taken
over by Environment
Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.
Centre
in the year 2006.

At the
first
glance, it can
be observed
that the farmhouse and path remained unchanged for the year 2006 when
in comparison
to 1976.
Further
, it
is depicted
that the storage facilities for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
farm
machinery
was replaced
by cars and in 2006 the parking meant for vehicles. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
farm
of corn
was turned
to multimedia room.

Upon more observation it can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "observe"
observed
that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
farm
yard confronting the farmhouse was
being demolished
and the new recreation area constructed. If we look at the picture more
keenly
, it can
be contemplated
that the place for cows and chickens was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to student housing, where the accommodation services offered for the students.

IELTS essay bell hill farm from the year 1976 to 2006

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
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4.0
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