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Globalization is good for people. Do you agree or disagree.

Globalization means collaborating with people of all nations and their government for their own economic developments and multiculturalism. Although some people argue that this is not a good approach, I completely agree with this statement. Firstly, the primary benefit of globalisation is that it helps in the growth of economy of various nations. In globalization, Companies of different nations interact with each other for business. After all the things settled with multi national Companies and government of a host country, the contracts are signed with them for doing there buisness. They do not only give profit and pay tax to the government, but also give employment to the people of the country. Which helps under develop or developing countries to grow colossally. In addition, globalization also helps in demolishing barriers of discrimination and promoting multiculturalism. Under globalisation, an individual is independent to get visa for all the countries present in world, so the can travel their and meet with people of different cultures and learn about their history and heritage. While they are visiting different places they can meet and greet with the person. Also, it increases brotherhood and peace in world. In contrast, it is also argued by some critics that globalization is not a good approach because there are few chances that some people get attracted towards culture of different nations and then start to forget their own culture. For instance: it is seen among most of the adults in the world that they are attractive towards western culture and start living like them by wearing clothes of their type, eating their foods, forgetting their own things and civilization. In conclusion, although cirtis hold an opinon that goloblisation have demerits,
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economic developments and multiculturalism. Although
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globalisation
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helps
in the growth of economy of various
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nations
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interact with each other for business.
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multi national
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, the contracts
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give profit and pay tax to the
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in demolishing barriers of discrimination and promoting multiculturalism. Under
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, an individual is independent to
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visa for all the
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present in world,
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the can travel their and
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and learn about their history and heritage. While they are visiting
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places they can
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to forget their
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living like them by wearing clothes of their type, eating their foods, forgetting their
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things and civilization.

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IELTS essay Globalization is good for people. Do you agree or disagree.

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