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• It is true fact that nowadays crime is increasing on alarming rate , It can be curtail.while,It is believed by many person that by putting criminals into jail for long period can help in reducing crime . In my opinion i completely agree with this statement there must be great need of putting them in prison and taught them a lesson.

Nowadays, due to upsurge in pressure of studying academic subjects is making people think that, such as non academic subjects must not longer there in school curriculum. while many people believe that these subjects are of no use, in my opinion i completely disagree with this statement as they act as stress buster and goal oriented in an students life. Firstly, it is crystal clear that there are iui interesting subjects like arts, music and dancing etc, work as stress buster in learner's life, since they feel fun in doing these subjects and also get good vibes. It does not only give them energy to do more work, but also increases their academic performance, which leads to good result of students in study. In addition, instead of being stress buster some students also take them as a carrier option, students who do not have interest academic subjects like mathematics and science etc. They take extra co- curricular Very seriously as there future job. For example: it seen that actor who do not like academic studies or get failed in there school, they take acting bery seriously and become successful in their lives. In contrast, it is also argued by some critics that these subjects are time waste or less career oriented. As a result of it there is too much struggle or few chances of getting success. In todays world where everybody is not only doing rat racing for earning money, but also for luxurious lifestyle of there fantasies. In conclusion, although many people believe that non academic subjects are not of any use and removed from syllabus, yet i restate my opinion that these subjects are quite useful for students and act as stress reliever in there life.
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completely disagree with this statement as they act as
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life.

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interesting
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subjects
like arts, music and dancing etc, work as
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buster in learner's life, since they feel fun in doing these
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give them energy to do more work,
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performance, which leads to
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in study.

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buster
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also
take them as a carrier option,
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who do not have interest
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like mathematics and science etc. They take extra co- curricular

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studies or
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failed in there school, they take acting
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are time waste or less career oriented.
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world where everybody is not
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doing rat racing for earning money,
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for luxurious lifestyle of
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fantasies.

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, although
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believe that non
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are not of any
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and removed from syllabus,
yet
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i
restate my opinion that these
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are quite useful for
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students
and act as
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reliever in there life.
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IELTS essay • It is true fact that nowadays crime is increasing on alarming rate, It can be curtail. while, It is believed by many person that by putting criminals into jail for long period can help in reducing crime. In my opinion i completely agree with this statement there must be great need of putting them in prison and taught them a lesson.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
289 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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