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Globalization in new world

Globalization in new world O6D2k
Even though Globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative sides should not be forgotten. Discuss. Everything has tow sides in the world, and so has the prosses of globalization too. The effects of globalization on the world economy are diverted. We must acknowledge that the negative effects are from a different kind than the positive ones. Therfor the negative sides, like low paiment in less developed countries are important to conciderate. If we take the Eurozone for example, the economic changes according to the gloablisation process are huge. Many companies have transferred their factories into cheaper production earies to compeat in the world markes. The results are rising unemployment rates in the “old industrial countries”.
Even though
Globalization affects the
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world’s
economics in a
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very
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positive
way, its
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negative
sides should not
be forgotten
. Discuss.

Everything has tow sides in the
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world
, and
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so
has the
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prosses
of globalization too. The effects of globalization on the
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world
economy
are diverted
.

We
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must
acknowledge that the
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negative
effects are from a
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different
kind than the
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positive
ones.
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Therfor
the
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negative
sides, like low
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paiment
in less
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developed countries
are
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important
to
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conciderate
.

If we take the Eurozone
for example
, the economic
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changes
according to the
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gloablisation
process are huge.
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Many
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companies
have transferred their factories into cheaper production
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earies
to
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compeat
in the
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world
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markes
. The results are rising unemployment rates in the “
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old
industrial countries”.

IELTS essay Globalization in new world

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
120 words
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