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Globalization a challenge to the concept of nation-state. Write your opinion on it.

Globalization a challenge to the concept of nation-state. Write your opinion on it. dpOEP
Globalization is nothing but reducing barriers between the nation states for international commerce and communication. It can be sometimes seen as potential threat to nation states as the concept of nation state itself is sovereign government. Transportation became easy between the continents but it did not changed the sovereignty of individual nations. Instead, globalization changed the way nations deal with others. So in my opinion globalization is not a challenge for the concept of nation-state. However it favors westernization. So the countries that are dealing with America and Europe are at disadvantage. MNCs forces nation states to determine how much international influence they allow in their economies. It also creates a sense of interdependence among the nations. It could create an imbalance of power among different nations.
Globalization is nothing
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reducing barriers between the
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for international commerce and communication. It can be
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as the concept of
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itself is sovereign
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. Transportation became easy between the continents
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the sovereignty of individual
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, globalization
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deal with others.
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in my opinion globalization is not a challenge for the concept of nation-state.
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the countries that are dealing with America and Europe are at disadvantage.
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to determine how much international influence they
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in their economies. It
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IELTS essay Globalization a challenge to the concept of nation-state. Write your opinion on it.

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