Globalisation has both advantages and disadvantages. Discuss both and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words. v.4
Globalisation has both advantages and disadvantages.   v. 4
In this globalised era, there is a colossal upsurge in the trend to see people discussing that globalisation gives consumers a great option. Whereas, others states that, it affects the nature of a country and employment opportunities are unstable. Thereby, in my opinion, laws must be enforced to protect nature and to reduce job redundancies.
To commence with, compelling pieces of evidence prove that there is a plethora of advantages in globalisation. Firstly, it provides a wide variety of options for consumers. Because, goods provided in different countries are imported all together and are readily available in all supermarkets. For example, rosemary is the herb gives scrumptious tastes to pizza, but this could not be harvested in humid countries like India, consequently, it can be imported from overseas, likewise with the help of global market people could have a range of products to use.
However, on the other hand it has some downsides. First of all, even though it provides employment opportunities, still it could not be a stable one. This is because the international companies which offers jobs in developing countries can be moved to other nations where labour is cheap. Moreover, global trades create more waste and pollution by manufacturing loads of goods, which apparently cause detrimental effects to the environment. For example, according to a recent survey, around 65% of landfills are from industrial wastes and 20% is from throw-away products, which proves that these multinational markets has huge impacts on our nature.
To conclude, globalisation provides informed choices to people, still the downsides outweigh the advantages because it has no job security to the employees of global companies and it cause harmful effects to our environment. In my opinion, there should be a global regulation for salaries along with laws to protect the environment. 
In this  
globalised
 era, there is a colossal upsurge in the trend to  
see
  people
 discussing that  
globalisation
 gives consumers a great option. Whereas, others states that, it affects the nature of a  
country
 and employment opportunities are unstable. Thereby, in my opinion, laws  
must
  be enforced
 to protect nature and to  
reduce
 job redundancies.
To commence with, compelling pieces of evidence prove that there is a plethora of advantages in  
globalisation
.  
Firstly
, it provides a wide variety of options for consumers.  
Because
,  
goods
 provided in  
different
  countries
  are imported
 all together and are  
readily
 available in all supermarkets.  
For example
, rosemary is the herb gives scrumptious tastes to pizza,  
but
 this could not  
be harvested
 in humid  
countries
 like India,  
consequently
, it can  
be imported
 from overseas,  
likewise
 with the  
help
 of  
global
 market  
people
 could have a range of products to  
use
. 
However
,  
on the other hand
 it has  
some
 downsides.  
First of all
,  
even though
 it provides employment opportunities,  
still
 it could not be a stable one. This is  
because
 the international  
companies
 which offers jobs in developing  
countries
 can be  
moved
 to other nations where  
labour
 is  
cheap
.  
Moreover
,  
global
 trades create more waste and pollution by manufacturing loads of  
goods
, which  
apparently
 cause detrimental effects to the environment.  
For example
, according to a recent survey, around 65% of landfills are from industrial wastes and 20% is from throw-away products, which proves that these multinational markets has huge impacts on our nature. 
To conclude
,  
globalisation
 provides informed choices to  
people
,  
still
 the downsides outweigh the advantages  
because
 it has no job security to the employees of  
global
  companies
 and it  
cause
 harmful effects to our environment. In my opinion, there should be a  
global
 regulation for salaries along with laws to protect the environment. 
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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