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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? pgd0
Global warming is the most wearing threat and it is a Monster that will engulf humanity in the near future. This essay will examine the reason contributing to global warming and propose some possible solutions. To comments with the main cause of global warming with human expansion of the greenhouse effect. Emissions of gases like carbon dioxide, Methane, nitrogen oxide and the water vapour from the human resources has made the situation critical. Due to rapid pace in industrialisation the issue of global warming is in a state of flux. Deforestation and increasing concern Jungle is leading to climate change. Use of Non Biodegradable products adds fuel to the fire. Their standard of living has become high today and most people use private car, air conditioner, refrigerator and a wide range of gadgets. Air travel has also accelerated in recent days which results into massive pollution. Climate change led to several detrimental effects like frequent natural calamities, epidemics and lower the quality of life. Humankind stands between a rock and a hard place today. At this juncture, it is very essential to address this issue at the earliest. Awareness should be created amongst people. Tree planting activities should be conducted frequently. People should be persuaded to use public transportation or bicycle. Use of renewable energy should be promoted. There should be a stringent laws to protect nature. To mitigate the issue people have to be sensitive towards environment and start appreciating it. Recycling Industries can help solve the problem of renewable as well as non-renewable Waste. Many countries have understood the threat of global warming and in the recent summit in Paris solutions to cuurb this issue were discussed. To recapitulate, global warming is an evil born due to rapid urbanization and industrialization. There are many devastating effects of global warming and hence it is essential to take steps to combat this evil persistently.
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is the most wearing threat and it is a Monster that will engulf humanity in the near future. This essay will examine the reason contributing to
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global
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warming
and propose
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some
possible solutions.

To comments with the main cause of
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global
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warming
with human expansion of the greenhouse effect. Emissions of gases like carbon dioxide, Methane, nitrogen oxide and the water
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vapour
from the human resources has made the situation critical. Due to rapid pace in
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industrialisation
the
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issue
of
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global
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warming
is in a state of flux. Deforestation and increasing concern Jungle is leading to climate
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change
.
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of
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Non Biodegradable
products
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adds
fuel to the fire. Their standard of living has become high
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and most
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people
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use
private car, air conditioner, refrigerator and a wide range of gadgets. Air travel has
also
accelerated in recent days which results into massive pollution. Climate
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change
led to several detrimental effects like frequent natural calamities, epidemics and lower the quality of life. Humankind stands between a rock and a
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hard
place
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today
.

At this juncture, it is
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essential to address this
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issue
at the earliest. Awareness should
be created
amongst
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people
. Tree planting activities should
be conducted
frequently
.
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People
should
be persuaded
to
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use
public transportation or bicycle.
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of renewable energy should
be promoted
. There should be a stringent
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laws
to protect nature. To mitigate the
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issue
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people
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have to
be sensitive towards environment and
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start
appreciating it. Recycling Industries can
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help
solve the problem of renewable
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as non-renewable Waste.
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Many
countries have understood the threat of
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global
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warming
and in the recent summit in Paris solutions to
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cuurb
this
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issue
were discussed
.

To recapitulate,
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global
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warming
is an
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due to rapid urbanization and
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industrialization
. There are
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many
devastating effects of
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global
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warming
and
hence
it is essential to take steps to combat this evil
persistently
.
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IELTS essay Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
5.5
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