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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans faced in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this? What are some possible solutions? v.2

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans faced in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this? What are some possible solutions? v. 2
Global warming is one of the serious problems that mankind is facing these days. This essay discusses the major threats associated with the rising sea levels caused by global warming including flooding and the disappearance of coastal areas. This essay proposes certain appropriate solutions to address the epidemic. One of the major problems of global warming is flooding. Due to the increase in heat, ice melts at an alarming rate and causes a sudden overflow of water in the form of floods. This results in loss of property, life, and several other valuable things. For example, the recent floods in Japan reported a loss worth 3 million dollars and in addition to that, several people starved. Another major problem is the disappearance of coastal areas. The increased sea levels sink the coastal areas in water. As a result, several people evacuate the coastal areas. Moreover, this results in loss of fish and other sea creatures that inhabit the coastal areas. In order to address this problem, firstly, the government of every country should come forward to protect the environment from global warming. For example, the United Nations has created an organisation to ensure that every country has its pollution under control. It should be made mandatory for every country to join that organisation. Apart from the efforts of the government, individuals need to play their part in reducing global warming. For instance, they can try to avoid their dependence on cars and use public transport instead, which is environmentally friendly. Companies should try to become more eco-friendly and eliminate the usage of stuff that causes global warming. Global warming is a serious problem these days. The resulting rise in sea level can lead to several disasters like floods, extinction of coastal areas, and marine creatures. This problem can be solved through the combined efforts of the government, individuals, and companies.
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warming
is one of the serious
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problems
that mankind is facing these days. This essay discusses the major threats associated with the rising
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sea
levels caused by
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global
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warming
including flooding and the disappearance of
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coastal
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areas
. This essay proposes certain appropriate solutions to address the epidemic.

One of the major
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problems
of
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global
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warming
is flooding. Due to the increase in heat, ice melts at an alarming rate and causes a sudden overflow of water in the form of floods. This results in loss of property, life, and several other valuable things.
For example
, the recent floods in Japan reported a loss worth 3 million dollars and
in addition
to that, several
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people
starved. Another major
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problem
is the disappearance of
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coastal
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areas
. The increased
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sea
levels sink the
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coastal
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areas
in water.
As a result
, several
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people
evacuate the
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coastal
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areas
.
Moreover
, this results in loss of fish and other
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sea
creatures that inhabit the
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coastal
areas.

In order to address this
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,
firstly
, the
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government
of every country should
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come
forward to protect the environment from
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global
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warming
.
For example
, the United Nations has created an
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organisation
to ensure that every country has its pollution under control. It should
be made
mandatory for every country to
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join
that
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organisation
. Apart from the efforts of the
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government
, individuals need to play their part in reducing
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global
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warming
.
For instance
, they can try to avoid their dependence on cars and
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use
public transport
instead
, which is
environmentally
friendly.
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Companies
should try to become more eco-friendly and eliminate the usage of stuff that causes
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global
warming.

Global
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warming
is a serious
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problem
these days. The resulting rise in
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sea
level can lead to several disasters like floods, extinction of
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coastal
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areas
, and marine creatures. This
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problem
can
be solved
through the combined efforts of the
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government
, individuals, and
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companies
.
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33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans faced in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this? What are some possible solutions? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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