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Global warming is a serious problem. Do you agree about that and give some solution to solve that problem.

Global warming is a serious problem. Do you agree about that and give some solution to solve that problem. KYr3L
Currently, climate change is a serious problem that we are facing. As far as I concerned, this problem can result in a severe way in the future. It is possibly say that this issue may be caused by some main factors. One of the prominent reason is that the “greenhouse effect”. Trees are take in carbon dioxide and give off oxygen. But nowadays, the deforestation is multiply without the sign of stop. (People nowadays have the propensity for cutting down many hectares of forest to fill in the buildings and houses. ) Burning coal, oil and gas also increase the heat of Earth. This means, the carbon dioxide is always multiply in many different ways that we do not aware. In truth, some imperative measures ought to be taken to resolve these prospective issues. Growing more trees is highly recommend. This action is to improve more and more oxygen and reduct the carbon dioxide in our life. Likewise, instead of using coal, oil to the trains, locomotives, … we can use the wind-power, sun-power to help the enviroment. (In addition, the citizens are encouraged to turn to using renewable- energy vehicles as the alternative to the fuel ones to protect the environment and their health status. ) In conclusion, there are indeed various repercussions regarding yet, they can be solved once according measures are enlisted imperatively.
Currently
, climate
change
is a serious problem that we are facing. As far as I concerned, this problem can result
in a severe way
in the future.

It is
possibly
say that this issue may
be caused
by
some
main factors. One of the prominent reason is that the “greenhouse effect”. Trees are take in carbon dioxide and give off oxygen.
But
nowadays, the deforestation is multiply without the
sign
of
stop
. (
People
nowadays have the propensity for cutting down
many
hectares of forest to fill in the buildings and
houses
.
)
Burning coal, oil and gas
also
increase the heat of Earth. This means, the carbon dioxide is always multiply in
many
different
ways that we do not aware.

In truth,
some
imperative measures ought to
be taken
to resolve these prospective issues. Growing more trees is
highly
recommend
. This action is to
improve
more and more oxygen and
reduct
the carbon dioxide in our life.
Likewise
,
instead
of using coal, oil to the trains, locomotives, … we can
use
the wind-power, sun-power to
help
the
enviroment
. (
In addition
, the citizens
are encouraged
to turn to using renewable- energy vehicles as the alternative to the fuel ones to protect the environment and their health status.
)


In conclusion
, there are
indeed
various repercussions regarding
yet
, they can
be solved
once according measures
are enlisted
imperatively
.
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IELTS essay Global warming is a serious problem. Do you agree about that and give some solution to solve that problem.

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