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Global warming is a big concern these days. Though there has been much noise made on this issue, carbon emission is not being curtailed. Are we contributors to this issue? What solutions do you propose to counter this issue? Discuss.

Global warming is a big concern these days. Though there has been much noise made on this issue, carbon emission is not being curtailed. Are we contributors to this issue? What solutions do you propose to counter this issue? Discuss. GNmV2
Global warming has been observed since the pre- industrial period due to human activities. The primary reason was fossil fuel burning which increased green gas house levels on earth’s atomsphere. Since then global warming has become a concern area for the world. In this essay, I would like to enlighten my views on the given topic. It is true that human influence has affected the earth brutally and the community does not take care of the earth. Humans that cause global warming are far from which nature caused. There are several factors behind this such as industrialization, mining, and deforestation. First and Foremost, is the industrial revolution where the higher number of fossil fuel burns to power the machinery. For example, when we buy a mobile phone or any other gadget the process of making it involves machinery and machinery use fuel which in turn releases the carbon dioxide and affects the climate. Next, the most common issue is deforestation amid increased population and increased demand of wood is the main reason of cutting the trees To prevent this, we have to reduce the contribution of greenhouse gases to the atmosphere. For instance, we can use the hybrid car to reduce the gasoline. Besides, that petrol prices are increasing day by day. We have an option of car pooling and using shared taxes to travel. Another measure is to stop burning plastic products which release toxins and make the atmosphere hot. Moreover, the government should impose higher taxes for cutting the forests As, trees can prevent the higher temperature of the earth. In a nutshell, I would like to say that Earth is “sick” and we humans need to recover it because we have destroyed it. Our generation has to take care of the earth otherwise, the next generation will suffer the consequences of it.
Global warming has
been observed
since the
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pre
- industrial period due to
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human
activities. The primary reason was fossil fuel burning which increased green gas
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house
levels on
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earth’s
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atomsphere
. Since then global warming has become a concern area for the world. In this essay, I would like to enlighten my views on the
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given
topic.

It is true that
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human
influence has
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affected
the
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earth
brutally
and the community does not take care of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earth
.
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Humans
that cause global warming are far from which nature caused. There are several factors behind this such as industrialization, mining, and deforestation.
First
and Foremost, is the industrial revolution where the higher number of fossil fuel burns to power the machinery.
For example
, when we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a mobile phone or any other gadget the process of making it involves machinery and machinery
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
fuel which in turn releases the carbon dioxide and affects the climate.
Next
, the most common issue is deforestation amid increased population and increased demand of wood is the main reason of cutting the trees

To
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prevent
this, we
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have to
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reduce
the contribution of greenhouse gases to the atmosphere.
For instance
, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the hybrid car to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the gasoline.
Besides
, that petrol prices are increasing day by day. We have an option of car pooling and using shared taxes to travel. Another measure is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
burning plastic products which release toxins and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the atmosphere hot.
Moreover
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should impose higher taxes for cutting the forests

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
, trees can
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prevent
the higher temperature of the earth.

In a nutshell, I would like to say that
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Earth
is “sick” and we
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humans
need to recover it
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because
we have
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destroyed
it. Our generation
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has to
take care of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earth
otherwise
, the
next
generation will suffer the consequences of it.
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IELTS essay Global warming is a big concern these days. Though there has been much noise made on this issue, carbon emission is not being curtailed. Are we contributors to this issue? What solutions do you propose to counter this issue? Discuss.

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305 words
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