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global warming and its infact on modern life

global warming and its infact on modern life D28JE
the world is in 21 st century. Modern century and scientific idea makes human life more luxurious and modern. beside that there will be a huge loss of our natural resources. and big disadvantage of global warming. many people around the world use goods made from dead animal, and naturally scantly trees. most of the people eat different type of insect which change the process of natural habitat. due to this effect nowadays people are surviving the life threating disease and infection. in these days people love eating non vegetarian diet compare to veg diet. due to that effect human are getting more life threating infections.
the
world is in
21 st
century. Modern century and scientific
idea
makes
human life more luxurious and modern.
beside
that there will be a huge loss of our natural resources.
and
big
disadvantage of global warming.
many
people
around the world
use
goods
made from dead animal, and
naturally
scantly
trees.
most
of the
people
eat
different
type of insect which
change
the process of natural habitat.
due
to this effect nowadays
people
are surviving the life
threating
disease and infection.
in
these days
people
love
eating
non vegetarian
diet compare to veg diet.
due
to that effect human are getting more life
threating
infections.
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IELTS essay global warming and its infact on modern life

Essay
  American English
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106 words
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