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Global pandemic situation what should we have to and how to control the spilled

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Global pandemic is most common problem in all over the world in this present time. We have to find the solution how can overcome the pandemic. So in this situation we have to improve huge things. Like as make a social distance from each other, use personal protective items. Like as musk, cap hand sanitizer etc. And part of our life we have to maintain numerously thing fist of thing we have to follow strongly world health organization guide line.
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find the solution how can overcome the pandemic.
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make
a social distance from each other,
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use
personal protective items. Like as musk, cap hand sanitizer etc.

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IELTS essay Global pandemic situation what should we have to and how to control the spilled

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80 words
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