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Giving money to beggar is good ,some people disagree and some people agree.What your opinion?

Giving money to beggar is good, some people disagree and some people agree. What your opinion? EaJx
i support not give money to begger, not every begger is in need, sometimes they are acting fake for money just for alcohole and some other drug. If the person is physically and mentally fit then he can do some work for living. While giving them money we are incouraging them to begging because they think its the esiest way to earn money. Begging is like pitty market these days, they are begging money to buy drugs and in this market they are using children because people easily give money to children but we should not do this if you are doing this then we are making them week they will never learn to be self-sufficient. If we wil do this, they will stay on the street and be a begger forever. Instead of giving money we can provide work, education, to them with this they will be independent this will be the real help.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
support not give
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money
to
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begger
, not every
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begger
is in need,
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sometimes
they are acting fake for
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money
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just
for
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alcohole
and
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some
other drug. If the person is
physically
and mentally fit then he can do
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some
work for living. While giving them
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money
we are
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incouraging
them to begging
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because
they
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think
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its
the
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esiest
way to earn
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money
. Begging is like
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pitty
market these days, they are begging
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money
to
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buy
drugs and in this market they are using children
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because
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people
easily
give
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money
to children
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but
we should not do this if you are doing this then we are making them week they will never learn to be self-sufficient. If we
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wil
do this, they will stay on the street and be a
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begger
forever.

Instead
of giving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
we can provide work, education, to them with this they will be independent this will be the real
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

IELTS essay Giving money to beggar is good, some people disagree and some people agree. What your opinion?

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