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Giving money to beggar is good ,some people disagree and some people agree.What your opinion?

Giving money to beggar is good, some people disagree and some people agree. What your opinion? EaJx
i support not give money to begger, not every begger is in need, sometimes they are acting fake for money just for alcohole and some other drug. If the person is physically and mentally fit then he can do some work for living. While giving them money we are incouraging them to begging because they think its the esiest way to earn money. Begging is like pitty market these days, they are begging money to buy drugs and in this market they are using children because people easily give money to children but we should not do this if you are doing this then we are making them week they will never learn to be self-sufficient. If we wil do this, they will stay on the street and be a begger forever. Instead of giving money we can provide work, education, to them with this they will be independent this will be the real help.
i
support not give
money
to
begger
, not every
begger
is in need,
sometimes
they are acting fake for
money
just
for
alcohole
and
some
other drug. If the person is
physically
and mentally fit then he can do
some
work for living. While giving them
money
we are
incouraging
them to begging
because
they
think
its
the
esiest
way to earn
money
. Begging is like
pitty
market these days, they are begging
money
to
buy
drugs and in this market they are using children
because
people
easily
give
money
to children
but
we should not do this if you are doing this then we are making them week they will never learn to be self-sufficient. If we
wil
do this, they will stay on the street and be a
begger
forever.

Instead
of giving
money
we can provide work, education, to them with this they will be independent this will be the real
help
.
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IELTS essay Giving money to beggar is good, some people disagree and some people agree. What your opinion?

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