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Giving a Wedding speech to sister

Giving a Wedding speech to sister BMmYV

Alright! So Good afternoon everyone. First of all, I would like to thank you y'all very very much for being here today. I know so many of you have come from so far but no matter the distance. I know my lovely Rita and our groom, Bryan, and also both of our families are so happy that you all could make this journey to be here with us and celebrate this special day. And for those of you who don’t know me, I am Crystal who is the one and only sister of the most gorgeous bride and I was here today to be my sister’s maid of honor. To be honest, I’m really excited and at the same time, it is hard for me to come up with anything nice to say.

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 this journey to be here with us and celebrate this special day. And for those of you who don’t know me, I am Crystal who is the one and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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 to be my sister’s maid of honor. To be honest, I’m really
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 up with anything nice to say. 