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Describe your favourite leisure activity

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Today I'm going to talk about my favourite leisure activity. I guess one of my favourite leisure activities is surf the Facebook. Actually, it's a website which is more and more popular in the world and there are many people use it nowadays. You can invite people to be your friends, and then you can chat with them and share all sorts of stuff: photos, music, games, join groups. . . . anything really. I like Facebook because I can keep up with what all my friends are up to and it doesn't matter if they are far from me. So it's a really good way to keep in touch. The others reason I like it is that you can update information in the fastest and most accurate way. Especially, when the situation covid 19 is happening very complicated. Moreover, you can use it anywhere, well, anywhere where you have the internet. So, I mostly use it at home on my laptop. I probably use it almost everyday, I would say. I think I'm getting addicted to it.
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IELTS essay Describe your favourite leisure activity

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
178 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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