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Informal email: giving news

Informal email: giving news NMOn0

Yo Zero, How did you do last week? I hope you well because of Covid-19. My sister, Hòa, she has found a job. Yeah, you know that my sister just grade 11. So a part-time job is fit for her. She work at a coffe and milktea shop as a waitress. I’m glad she found a job, but I’m sure she’ll be out of work because of Covid-19. However, I hope everything will be fine. Just yesterday, while i was cleaning my room, i found my medal. The sliver medal that I won at the sports festival in martials arts, it reminds me of those days, but this award is only at the city level it doesn’t say much. How about you? Hope you will reply. -Daggi-

Did you mean "to", "you" or "your"?ToYouYour
Yo
 Zero,

How did you do last week? I hope you well This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of Covid-19.

My sister, Possible spelling mistake found.HowHotHopHoaxGoaHog
Hòa
, she has found a job. Yeah, you know that my sister This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 grade 11. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 a part-time job is fit
 for her. She work at a Possible spelling mistake found.coffeeCoffeycofferCOFF
coffe
 and Possible spelling mistake found.milk tea
milktea
 shop as a waitress. I’m glad she found a job, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I’m sure she’ll be out of work This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of Covid-19. However
, I hope everything will be fine.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 yesterday, while Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was cleaning my room, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 found my medal. The sliver medal that I won at the sports festival in Possible spelling mistake found.martialMartialMartianspartialsmartians
martials
 arts, it reminds me of those days, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this award is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 at the city level it doesn’t say much.

How about you? Hope you will reply.

Possible spelling mistake found.MaggiedaggerBraggAggieAgniMagi
-Daggi
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