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I am really happy about your graduation from this course and also congratulate you on achieving encouraging progress after the course. I would like to give you some points which could help you get better. We start with your strengths. Firstly, you find out more comprehensive expression and make your story be more interesting. Besides, there are fewer grammatical mistakes in your second essay. Another thing is using formal language when writing, which completely differs from spoken language. On the other hand, you need to improve your vocabulary. In addition, you have to learn more structures to write your ideas easily and naturally. Reading is a great way to assist you because it not only helps you know new words in context, know a lot of wonderful structures but also expands your knowledge helping you have good ideas for your writings. You also can do everything you like in English to recognize that English is really familiar and around you but not so far away. Finally, I hope you will succeed in the future.
I am
really
happy about your graduation from this course and
also
congratulate you on achieving encouraging progress after the course. I would like to give you
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some
points which could
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help
you
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get
better. We
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start
with your strengths.
Firstly
, you find out more comprehensive expression and
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make
your story be more interesting.
Besides
, there are fewer grammatical mistakes in your second essay. Another thing is using formal language when writing, which completely differs from spoken language.
On the other hand
, you need to
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improve
your vocabulary.
In addition
, you
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have to
learn more structures to write your
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ideas
easily
and
naturally
. Reading is a great way to assist you
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because
it not
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only
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helps
you know new words in context, know
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a lot of
wonderful structures
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but
also
expands your knowledge helping you have
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good
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ideas
for your writings. You
also
can do everything you like in English to recognize that English is
really
familiar and around you
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but
not
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so
far away.
Finally
, I hope you will succeed in the future.
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Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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