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ghvslrug h;weiHF;EORIGH;oiefhgae;irug

ghvslrug h; weiHF; EORIGH; oiefhgae; irug aE0YP
It’s widely believed by some people that linguistic teachers should better praising students’ works which are done pretty well, rather than trying to find inaccuracies and mistakes in them. In my opinion, I completely agree that criticism is extremely important in the performance of any job. On the one hand, almost every sort of work can’t be done perfectly and has a room for improvement. Language skills are really hard to get and masters are the ones who were taught to help pupils to achieve more in a dialect usage. For instance, a pedagogue may suggest a new better kind of vocabulary which learner wasn’t aware of before and can exploit it in the future projects that will demonstrate their betterment. Another point to consider is that rigorous performance assessment probably adversely affects the growth of potential of disciples. People might take criticism too seriously and become afraid to express themselves fully. For example, there are people who are by their nature are prone to harsh self-criticism, so an unwanted evaluation of their work, which was done fine in principle, can demotivate a student to keep trying their best. In conclusion, strict teaching is more beneficial for discovering mistakes and improving language skills.
It’s
widely
believed by
some
people
that linguistic teachers should better praising students’ works which
are done
pretty well,
rather
than trying to find inaccuracies and mistakes in them. In my opinion, I completely
agree
that criticism is
extremely
important
in the performance of any job.

On the one hand, almost every sort of work can’t
be done
perfectly
and has a room for improvement. Language
skills
are
really
hard
to
get
and masters are the ones who
were taught
to
help
pupils to achieve more in a dialect usage.
For instance
, a pedagogue may suggest a new better kind of vocabulary which learner wasn’t aware of
before
and can exploit it in the future projects that will demonstrate their betterment.

Another point to consider is that rigorous performance assessment
probably
adversely
affects the growth of potential of disciples.
People
might take criticism too
seriously
and become afraid to express themselves
fully
.
For example
, there are
people
who are by their nature are prone to harsh self-criticism,
so
an unwanted evaluation of their work, which
was done
fine in principle, can demotivate a student to
keep
trying their best.

In conclusion
, strict teaching is more beneficial for discovering mistakes and improving language
skills
.
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IELTS essay ghvslrug h; weiHF; EORIGH; oiefhgae; irug

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
203 words
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