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The bar chart shows the gender distribution between teachers in six various forms of educational institutions in the UK in 2010. The quantity of male and female teachers is distinguished between different types of educational institutions. So, at the nursery/pre-school, primary school, and secondary school female teachers outnumbered males. The gender gap was particularly large at the nursery and pre-school entities. However, at the college, the equality of both genders is highlighted. But in private training institutes and universities, there is the dominance of male teachers over female ones, but the gap isn't so crucial as in pre- and primary schools. The thing is the more serious the educational institution is, the more male teachers and the fewer females operate there. That leads to the emergence of gender stereotypes in the field of education. Overall, the chart shows that in primary and middle educational institutions female teachers dominate, while in higher institutions male teachers are over-represented.
The bar chart
shows
the gender distribution between
teachers
in six various forms of

educational institutions in the UK in 2010.

The quantity of male and
female
teachers
is distinguished
between
different
types of

educational institutions.
So
, at the nursery/
pre-school
, primary school, and secondary

school
female
teachers
outnumbered
males
. The gender gap was
particularly
large at

the nursery and
pre-school
entities.
However
, at the college, the equality of both

genders
is highlighted
.
But
in private training institutes and universities, there is the

dominance of male
teachers
over
female
ones,
but
the gap isn't
so
crucial as in
pre
- and

primary schools.

The thing is the more serious the educational
institution
is, the more male
teachers
and

the fewer
females
operate there. That leads to the emergence of gender stereotypes in

the field of education.

Overall
, the chart
shows
that in primary and middle educational institutions female

teachers dominate, while in higher institutions male
teachers
are over-represented.
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IELTS essay gender distribution between teachers in six various forms of educational institutions

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