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You must play sport if you don’t want to be an iller

You must play sport if you don’t want to be an iller 6aJar

Playing sport is important but also it can be danger if you do the wrong way. Playing sport can make you happier, good for your health, your heart, your brain… or you’ll have a beautiful body if you have a good training schedule, firstly food plays a very important role, play sport without provide enough food for a long time it can make you tired, no exciting in sport, sleepy but you can’t sleep, amyotrophic lateral sclerosis, If it is too long, it will lead to many bad effects on health, even death so that food is important, secondly good training schedule also important, you have it also mean you have a strong health, and you’ll know limit your own strength, finally if you can combine food and training schedule, your own limit you are a strong, beautiful body, it can be dangerous if you do in high amtitude, of playing a dangerous sport like fighting, football, ( it can’t be danger if you careful) that’s all

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