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Furthermore, having friends who sometime disagree, leads us to discussion

Furthermore, having friends who sometime disagree, leads us to discussion 0ER8G
In today’s competitive world, where everyone is pushed on to be vocal about ones Ideas. I would be discussing from both point of views of having friends who always agree to them or sometimes disagree to them and later would sharing my opinion on it. Firstly, while thinking from the perceptive of choosing a friend who always has similar opinion I believe that people with similar thought process have more dedication towards the cause. We need not to churn much of energy in explaining the things but to get the things done in faster way. Furthermore, having friends who sometime disagree, leads us to discussion. Which further leads not only to get the pros and cons related to idea but sometimes it leads to a thought process which is way better than the previous one. Any places where there is a healthy debate outcome is always better. For example, if any goal is set out after the discussion and resolving all the differences then the focus of everyone is going to be more and the zeal to achieve is high as there is not even an iota of doubt left in ones mind. Taking everything into account, a friend need not to be always agree with ones ideas. Every human being is an individual and every individual has their own ideology and thought process. A friend who sometimes disagrees to our way of thinking, always challenges to come up with better idea.
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today
’s competitive world, where everyone
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on to be vocal about
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ones
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Ideas
. I would be discussing from both point of views of having
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friends
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who
always
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agree
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sometimes
disagree to them and later would
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sharing
my opinion on it.

Firstly
, while thinking from
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the perceptive of
choosing a
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friend
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who
always has similar opinion I believe that
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people
with similar
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thought
process have more dedication towards the cause. We need not
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to churn
much of energy in explaining the things
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but
to
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get
the things done in faster way.

Furthermore
, having
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friends
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who
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sometime
disagree, leads us to discussion. Which
further
leads not
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only
to
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get
the pros and cons related to
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idea
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but
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sometimes
it leads to a
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thought
process which is way better than the previous one. Any places where there is a healthy debate outcome is always better.
For example
, if any goal
is set
out after the discussion and resolving all the differences then the focus of everyone is going to be more and the zeal to achieve is high as there is not even an iota of doubt
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left
in
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ones
mind.

Taking everything into account, a
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friend
need not
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to be
always
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agree
with
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ones
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ideas
. Every human being is an individual and every individual has their
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own
ideology and
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thought
process. A
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friend
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who
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sometimes
disagrees to our way of thinking, always challenges to
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come
up with better
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.
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IELTS essay Furthermore, having friends who sometime disagree, leads us to discussion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
242 words
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