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describe a places which is important to you

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I’m going to describe a places which is significant to me. That main is the location near my house. This is astronomy park. Must say here is a places of interest. Because speaking is perfected and active. When I and my mother and were jogging together. We discovered this places by accident. It looks like eco-tourism miniature. Because it not only lots of trees and lawns but also artificial lake. So it looks really exquisite and tranquil. Even though it’s in the middle of hustle and bustle of city. It is still eco-friendly. Although the location not famous, it eye – catching for people. Both vibrant and peacefull. It help people relieve stress after hard working day
I’m going to
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describe
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a places
which is significant to me. That main is the location near my
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house
. This is astronomy park.
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Must
say
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here is a places
of interest.
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Because
speaking
is perfected
and active. When I and my mother and were jogging together. We discovered this places by accident. It looks like
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eco-tourism
miniature.
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Because
it not
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only
lots of trees and lawns
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but
also
artificial lake.
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So
it looks
really
exquisite and tranquil.
Even though
it’s in the middle of hustle and bustle of city. It is
still
eco-friendly. Although the location not
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famous
, it
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eye
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–
catching for
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people
. Both vibrant and
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peacefull
. It
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help
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people
relieve
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stress
after
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
hard working
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day
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IELTS essay describe a places which is important to you

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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