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Fresh Water has always been a limited Resources in some parts of the world. Today, However, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. what are the causes of the increased demand and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem, v.1

Fresh Water has always been a limited Resources in some parts of the world. Today, However, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. what are the causes of the increased demand and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem, v. 1
Nowadays, there has been a growing concern for the lack of natural water in some countries around the nations, which is now seen as a common challenge as a result of the increase in the need for it. Although, several factors have contributed to the limitations in the supply of fresh water, there are quite some numbers of control government and individuals can put in place to curb the issue. One of the major reasons for scarcity is as a result of the high number of the population in some parts of the world. Over the years, the majority of these countries have recorded a large growing rate of chile birth, which has contributed immensely to a shortage of natural resources in satisfying the growing population. For example, in Africa, during the late 90s, the specie of some food items like fish, vegetables was running out of season as a result of high consumption making their supply to be limited in the market. On the other hand, the change in climate is another cause of the high demand. Climate change could be caused by pollution, whether by air or litter. for example, in the case of water pollution, when contaminants get in contact with fresh water, it makes it become contaminated and may turn the water to be useless for human use making it limited in supply and not being able to meet the growing needs of human, However, there are several controls governments and individuals can put in place. The government should make strict policies to discourage pollution of any kind in their countries, either by providing waste bin for all litters or reduce the use or cars that pollute natural resources. In addition, individuals should always practice water recycling in their various homes by utilizing used water for other purposes. finally, inasmuch as there are lots of reasons for the high demand for fresh water, government and individuals could create some measures to control it.
Nowadays, there has been a
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growing
concern for the lack of natural
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water
in
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countries around the nations, which is
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seen
as a common challenge
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of the increase in the need for it. Although, several factors have contributed to the limitations in the supply of fresh
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water
, there are quite
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some
numbers of control
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government
and
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individuals
can put in place to curb the issue.

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as a result
of the
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high
number of the population in
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some
parts of the world. Over the years, the majority of these countries have recorded a large
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growing
rate of
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chile
birth, which has contributed
immensely
to a shortage of natural resources in satisfying the
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growing
population.
For example
, in Africa, during the late 90s, the specie of
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some
food items like fish, vegetables was running out of season
as a result
of
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high
consumption making their supply to
be limited
in the market.
On the other hand
, the
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change
in climate is another cause of the
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high
demand. Climate
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change
could
be caused
by pollution, whether by air or litter.
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for
example, in the case of
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pollution, when contaminants
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get
in contact with fresh
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, it
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makes
it become contaminated and may turn the
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water
to be useless for human
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use
making it limited in supply and not being able to
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meet
the
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growing
needs of human,

However
, there are several controls
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governments
and
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individuals
can put in place. The
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government
should
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make
strict policies to discourage pollution of any kind in their countries, either by providing waste bin for all litters or
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reduce
the
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use
or cars that pollute natural resources.
In addition
,
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individuals
should always practice
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water
recycling in their various homes by utilizing
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used
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water
for other purposes.

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finally
, inasmuch as there are lots of reasons for the
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high
demand for fresh
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water
,
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government
and
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individuals
could create
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some
measures to control it.
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IELTS essay Fresh Water has always been a limited Resources in some parts of the world. Today, However, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. what are the causes of the increased demand and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem, v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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