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Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some part of the world today our growing worldwide demand has made this Global

Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some part of the world today our growing worldwide demand has made this Global BWKm5
Water is rudimentary not only for human being but also for any living things such as trees, mosquitos, animals and so on. on the other hands, to save you survive without water is the impossible for any race living on the earth. In addition, with the upsurging population. This is to become a matter of concern. Although, having large portion of the earth covered by the water, it is a huge problem for many Nation as only less than a the portion is drinkable. Considering causes of plummeting of the freshwater resources, first and foremost, supplying more than the decided quantity to the industries. on the top of that, they release that faul water without treating. due to that, the resource contaminated. as the consequences, they are notable to use again. subseqently, unbridled spent water also an issue which should be kept in mind. This also a major reasons for arising scarcity of water. Other than that, improper arrengement of water supplying system. Owing to it wastage escalating. Describing the solution, the reason of particular area Ought to be construct the dams to prevent the rain water flow through sea. moreover, the authorities must have to amend their outdated policy and as soon as possible they have been put into the action, specially for the industry. additionally, government must have to do a mandatory to ground water resources system for industrial as well as commercial and educational construction too. finally, they have to encourage the netizens for the system like rain water harvesting. By and large to overcome these detrimental for future. at the end, We all have to consider this as our sole responsibility rather than blaming government for that.
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for any living things such as trees,
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, animals and
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on. on the other hands, to save you survive without
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water
is the impossible for any race living on the earth.
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water
, it is a huge problem for
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portion is drinkable. Considering causes of plummeting of the freshwater resources,
first
and foremost, supplying more than the decided quantity to the industries.
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on
the top of that, they release that
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faul
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water
without treating.
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due
to that, the resource contaminated.
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as
the consequences, they are notable to
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use
again.
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subseqently
, unbridled spent
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water
also
an issue which should be
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kept
in mind. This
also
a major reasons for arising scarcity of
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water
. Other than that, improper
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arrengement
of
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supplying system. Owing to it wastage escalating.

Describing the solution, the reason of particular area Ought to be
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construct
the dams to
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prevent
the rain
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flow through sea.
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moreover
, the authorities
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must
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amend their outdated policy and as
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soon
as possible they have
been put
into the action,
specially
for the industry.
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additionally
,
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government
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must
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have to
do a mandatory to ground
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water
resources system for industrial
as well
as commercial and educational construction too.
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finally
, they
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have to
encourage the netizens for the system like rain
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water
harvesting.

By and large to overcome these detrimental for future.
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at
the
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end
, We all
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have to
consider this as our sole responsibility
rather
than blaming
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government
for that.
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IELTS essay Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some part of the world today our growing worldwide demand has made this Global

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
281 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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