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Fossil fuel cars should be banned , and replace with electric cars. Do you agree or disagree?

Fossil fuel cars should be banned, and replace with electric cars. QMQPy
There should be prohibition of all the vehicles that combust fossil fuels and they should be switch with electric cars. I agree with this opinion because it reduces air pollution and global warming. This essay will explain my reasons and also provide evidence to support them. To begin with, the emission of fumes from automobiles cause air pollution. To elaborate on, the combustion of these fossil fuels (non-renewable energy) give fumes as their waste product which contains carbon monoxide, that destroys the atmosphere. The air we inhale becomes poisonous which is detrimental to our health. However, electric vehicles do not produce fumes, they rely solely on the stored energy in their batteries. This fumeless cars do not have any direct drawback concerning our health and the environment. For instance, in Ghana most of the hospital attendants with respiratory tract diseases were from the urban areas which air pollution is rampant. In addition, the combustion of gases from vehicles cause global warming. In detail, global warming occurs when the world's temperature rises which causes some incidence like rise in glaciers. Global heating causes the icebergs to melt. When these continue to thaw, the sea level rises causing various disasters. Electric automobiles however do not cause global warming which may lead to uncertainties. In Philippine for example, the icebergs molten which caused some cities to drown. In conclusion, I concur that every vehicle that combust gases should not be allowed and should be replaced with electric cars because it minimises the occurrence of air pollution and global warming as well.
There should be prohibition of all the
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vehicles
that combust fossil
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fuels and
they should be switch with
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electric
cars. I
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with this opinion
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because
it
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reduces
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air
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pollution
and
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global
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warming
. This essay will
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explain
my reasons and
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begin
with, the emission of fumes from automobiles
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cause
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air
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pollution
. To elaborate on, the combustion of these fossil fuels (non-renewable energy) give fumes as their waste product which contains carbon monoxide, that
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destroys
the atmosphere. The
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air
we inhale becomes poisonous which is detrimental to our health.
However
,
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electric
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vehicles
do not produce fumes, they rely
solely
on the stored energy in their batteries. This
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fumeless
cars do not have any direct drawback concerning our health and the environment.
For instance
, in Ghana most of the hospital attendants with respiratory tract diseases were from the urban areas which
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air
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pollution
is rampant.

In addition
, the combustion of gases from
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vehicles
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cause
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global
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warming
. In detail,
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global
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warming
occurs when the world's temperature rises which
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causes
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some
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incidence
like rise in glaciers.
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Global
heating
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causes
the icebergs to melt. When these continue to thaw, the sea level rises causing various disasters.
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Electric
automobiles
however
do not
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cause
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global
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warming
which may lead to uncertainties. In Philippine
for example
, the icebergs molten which caused
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some
cities to drown.

In conclusion
, I concur that every
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vehicle
that combust gases should not be
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allowed
and should
be replaced
with
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electric
cars
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because
it
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minimises
the occurrence of
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air
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pollution
and
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global
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warming
as well
.
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IELTS essay Fossil fuel cars should be banned, and replace with electric cars.

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258 words
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