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Forgiveness for yourself

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You know, mistakes are unavoidable in life. Others make mistakes and you make mistakes as well forgiveyourselfto make life easier. after all the tranquility you seek is the most precious thing in our hectic world! So have you ever stretched a period of excusing for someone or yourself? I am a person who thinks a lot and frequently blames myself formy mistakes. I constantly think about something and analyze all circumstances. I know that it's difficult to forgive someone because l always blame myself for not doing it sooner and more effectively. Considering using nasty words or putting yourself in other people's shoes and comparing yourself to them. I'm always tense and irritated about everything. I frequently lose control of myself and think negatively as a result of the constant release. I ultimately forgave it and let it go. Returning my peace and liberty to me. Breaking free from the tyranny of anguish. So, do you think you've ever forgiven yourself? It takes time, patience, and guts to admit and repair your mistakes. It's more harder when we have to forgive ourselves for our faults. It is not an easy journey to forgiveness. You can learn to forgive yourself if you are self-aware and recognize that life is a journey rather than a sprint. Moreover, Forgiving yourself is similar. It is a battle that each soul in that battle must fight for days, months and even years to forget a certain mistake in the past. Forgiveness is one of the most precious things that I are able to do for myself. I believe that allowing myself to be idle when you're hurt is not an option. Because letting myself be free of pain is a daily battle. So, through reading, learning a new language, yoga, dance, cooking, stitching, and watching movies, let the body apply the development mechanism. These things aid in the regulation of my emotions. and concentrate more on the current position. In conclusion, I realize that the best thing we should do is not only love ourselves or thinking for ourselves. It is just simple to forgive ourselves.
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So
have you ever stretched a period of excusing for someone or yourself? I am a person who
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a lot and
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blames myself
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mistakes
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constantly
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about something and analyze all circumstances.
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I
know that it's difficult to
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someone
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l always blame myself for not doing it sooner and more
effectively
. Considering using nasty words or putting yourself in other
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's shoes and comparing yourself to them. I'm always tense and irritated about everything. I
frequently
lose control of myself and
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negatively
as a result
of the constant release.
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I
ultimately
forgave it and
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it go. Returning my peace and liberty to me. Breaking free from the tyranny of anguish.
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So
, do you
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think
you've ever forgiven yourself? It takes time, patience, and guts to admit and repair your
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mistakes
. It's
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more harder
when we
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ourselves
for our faults.
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It
is not an easy journey to forgiveness. You can learn to
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forgive
yourself if you are self-aware and recognize that life is a journey
rather
than a sprint.
Moreover
, Forgiving yourself is similar. It is a battle that each soul in that battle
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must
fight for days, months and even years to forget a certain
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in the past. Forgiveness is one of the most precious things that I are able to do for myself. I believe that allowing myself to be idle when you're hurt is not an option.
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letting myself be free of pain is a daily battle.
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So
, through reading, learning a new language, yoga, dance, cooking, stitching, and watching movies,
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let
the body apply the development mechanism. These things aid in the regulation of my emotions.
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and
concentrate more on the
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current
position.
In conclusion
, I realize that the best thing we should do is not
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IELTS essay Forgiveness for yourself

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
351 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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