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For the past few decades, we have observed a major shift in the climatic conditions of planet Earth. Drift in the environmental system. is largely due to global warming which has become an acute problem.

For the past few decades, we have observed a major shift in the climatic conditions of planet Earth. Drift in the environmental system. is largely due to global warming which has become an acute problem. Lw02G
From the previous few years, it has been witnessed that there was a dramatic change in climatic conditions on the planet Earth and various flurry activities which affect the environmental system and the major role is played by the global warming in altering climate and weather of the Earth. Although this essay will articulate some of its problems owing to human activities and raise in temperature and propose some possible solutions to alleviate this burning issue. To commence with, there are a plethora of reasons that are liable for an increase in global warming and also have detrimental impacts on natural habitats and cycles. The first and the foremost is that human activities, many selfish legislative and policies created this worse situation on the Earth by cutting trees lead to deforestation, which destroyed the habitats of many animals and birds. In the same vein, it results in rising in temperature and heat lead to ill consequences such as the melting of ice caps outcomes in floods and will demolish dwellings of humans and soar the amount of carbon dioxide and monoxide which act on the ozone layer. Despite it, not only do industries discharge an immense quantity of chemicals,   but also modern technologies released harmful fumes in the air aftermath of acid rain. Moreover, acid rain contains rain water and other oxides such as sulphur dioxide,   nitric acid and so forth. For instance, according to the survey, it was manifested that about two-thirds of ice caps floe contribute to global warming on the Earth. In the terms of tough measures, Firstly, every person ought to be plant trees and has to follow 3R's rule: Reduce, Reuse, Recycle. Instead of throwing wastage products after one use, they need to use them again and again. Hence, it has a favourable influence on the environment and climatic conditions. Besides it, to bring down the pollution, the best way to use battery charges vehicle and need to adopt another source of energy such as wind energy, kinetic energy, solar energy, hydroelectric power and many more. In addition to it, administrations ought to make some laws regarding the 'Project Save Earth' and strict fines will be imposed on the violators of the laws. It is the responsibility of everyone's to cooperate with the bureaucracy by abiding by the laws. In the final reckoning, various factors influence on weather and climate of the Earth that results in global warming but by adopting these preventive measures it would be easier to cope with this problem.
From the previous few years, it has
been witnessed
that there was a dramatic
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change
in climatic conditions on the planet
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Earth
and various flurry activities which affect the environmental system and the major role
is played
by the
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global
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warming
in altering climate and weather of the
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Earth
. Although this essay will articulate
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some
of its problems owing to human activities and raise in temperature and propose
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
possible solutions to alleviate this burning issue.

To commence with, there are a plethora of reasons that are liable for an increase in
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global
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warming
and
also
have detrimental impacts on natural habitats and cycles.

The
first
and the foremost
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is
that human activities,
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many
selfish legislative and policies created this worse situation on the
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Earth
by cutting trees lead to deforestation, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroyed
the habitats of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
animals and birds. In the same vein, it results in rising in temperature and heat lead to ill consequences such as the melting of ice caps outcomes in floods and will demolish dwellings of humans and soar the amount of carbon dioxide and monoxide which act on the ozone layer. Despite it, not
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only
do industries discharge an immense quantity of chemicals,
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but
also
modern technologies released harmful fumes in the air aftermath of acid rain.
Moreover
, acid rain contains rain water and other oxides such as
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sulphur
dioxide,
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nitric acid and
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so
forth.
For instance
, according to the survey, it
was manifested
that about two-thirds of ice caps floe contribute to
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global
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warming
on the Earth.

In the terms of tough measures,
Firstly
, every person ought to be plant trees and
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has to
follow 3R's
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rule
:
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Reduce
, Reuse, Recycle.
Instead
of throwing wastage products after one
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use
, they need to
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use
them again and again.
Hence
, it has a
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favourable
influence on the environment and climatic conditions.
Besides
it, to bring down the pollution, the best way to
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use
battery charges vehicle and need to adopt another source of
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energy
such as wind
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energy
, kinetic
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energy
, solar
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energy
, hydroelectric power and
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many
more.
In addition
to it, administrations ought to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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some
laws regarding the 'Project Save Earth' and strict fines will
be imposed
on the violators of the laws. It is the responsibility of everyone's to cooperate with the bureaucracy by abiding by the laws.

In the final reckoning, various factors influence on weather and climate of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Earth
that results in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
warming
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
by adopting these preventive measures it would be easier to cope with this problem.
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IELTS essay For the past few decades, we have observed a major shift in the climatic conditions of planet Earth. Drift in the environmental system. is largely due to global warming which has become an acute problem.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
420 words
6.0
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