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Technology?Advantage and his disadvantage ?

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Technology means machinary and equipment which develop from the help of human's in his work. Technology makes work so, much easier. scientics develop large quantite of machinary for different uses like washing machine, micro vaves, refrigerater these all machinary are use for house works some machinary are develop for industry or fcatory uses. These machinary makes the work effertless and people do not need to doing hardwork. In busy schedule these machinary seems very benefisheal for us. In other hand, now days human replace with machinery and jobs will decrease. So, many people are free now and they have no work beacuse of this machineary. conclusion is that, machineary makees work easier but they also decrease the jobs opporunity.
Technology means
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machinary
and equipment which develop from the
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help
of human's in his
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work
. Technology
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makes
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work
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so
, much easier.
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scientics
develop large
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quantite
of
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machinary
for
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different
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uses
like washing machine, micro
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vaves
,
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refrigerater
these all
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machinary
are
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use
for
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house
works
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some
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machinary
are
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develop
for industry or
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fcatory
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uses
. These
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machinary
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makes
the
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work
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effertless
and
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people
do not need to doing
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hardwork
. In busy schedule these
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machinary
seems
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very
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benefisheal
for us. In other hand,
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now
days human replace with machinery and jobs will decrease.
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So
,
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many
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people
are free
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now and
they have no
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work
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beacuse
of this
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machineary
.
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conclusion
is that,
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machineary
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makees
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work
easier
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but
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also
decrease the jobs
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opporunity
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IELTS essay Technology? Advantage and his disadvantage?

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