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For most people, one of the moments that are special to them is the wedding day. However, it becomes usual that one of the two main characters of the occasion may have cold feet.

For most people, one of the moments that are special to them is the wedding day. However, it becomes usual that one of the two main characters of the occasion may have cold feet. KYwLR
For most people, one of the moments that are special to them is the wedding day. However, it becomes usual that one of the two main characters of the occasion may have cold feet. In my opinion, it is understandable at some extent why they had such behavior. To begin with, getting married is an extreme important day regardless the fact that you are male or female. In fact, the concept of the wedding day is to mark the first day that two partners are tied together by the rope of love and continue to go forth on their romantic journey. In other words, the bride and the groom are responsible for each other to the rest of their life as they promised. As I understand, a large number of people, especially youngsters, clearly have a fear for being in a commitment.
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day regardless the fact that you are male or female. In fact, the concept of the wedding day is to mark the
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day that two partners
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together by the rope of
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love
and continue to go forth on their romantic journey.
In other words
, the bride and the groom are responsible for each other to the rest of their life as they promised. As I understand,
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IELTS essay For most people, one of the moments that are special to them is the wedding day. However, it becomes usual that one of the two main characters of the occasion may have cold feet.

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