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For better grades-use your brain

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After reading "For better grades-use your brain" in Unit 1, I can recite up to 50 new words every day. This passage gave me four better learning tips, and they reminded me of flashcards as well as spaced repetition. It motivated me to apply this method to learning new English and Chinese words. In particular, my learning solution is as follows. Firstly, I collected new words in English comics, impressive phrases in textbooks, or memorable words I saw, and then I made flashcards. Secondly, I attempted to come across as possible at different times a day. Finally, I revised them after a day, a week, a month, and before the exam. This method has enhanced my study productivity. I no longer have to stay up late studying when the exam comes
After reading
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For better grades-
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your brain
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in Unit 1, I can recite up to 50 new words every day. This passage gave me four better learning tips, and they reminded me of flashcards
as well
as spaced repetition. It motivated me to apply this method to learning new English and Chinese words.
In particular
, my learning solution is as follows.
Firstly
, I collected new words in English comics, impressive phrases in textbooks, or memorable words I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
, and then I made flashcards.
Secondly
, I attempted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
across as possible at
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
times a day.
Finally
, I revised them after a day, a week, a month, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the exam. This method has enhanced my study productivity. I no longer
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
stay up late studying when the exam
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comes
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IELTS essay For better grades-use your brain

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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