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For and aganst essay about tourism

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In recent years, tourism has become increasingly vital. The demand for traveling to other countries of tourists is growing popular and simply. One question if tourism is good or not for one country. Each problem has different faces that need considering. It is sometimes said that tourism increases national budgets. The more tourists visit, the more attention other people think too that country and the trade between countries. Tourism helps foreign tourists understand various cultures and historical facts of that country. An incredible number of tourists shows the popularity of this country. However, a massive number of visitors may negatively impact the environment or excessive building, roads, and shops as well. No matter how one country has economic growth. Still, the natural resource is destroyed or exhausted. It will lead to harmful consequences. If we can solve this problem, tourism still benefits the country in general and humans in particular. In conclusion, . . .
In recent years,
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tourism
has become
increasingly
vital. The demand for traveling to other
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countries
of
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tourists
is growing popular and
simply
. One question if
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tourism
is
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good
or not for one
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country
. Each problem has
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different
faces that need considering.

It is
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sometimes
said that
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tourism
increases national budgets. The more
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tourists
visit, the more attention other
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people
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think
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too that
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country
and the trade between
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countries
.
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Tourism
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helps
foreign
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tourists
understand various cultures and historical facts of that
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country
. An incredible number of
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tourists
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shows
the popularity of this country.

However
, a massive number of visitors may
negatively
impact the environment or excessive building, roads, and shops
as well
. No matter how one
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country
has economic growth.
Still
, the natural resource is
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destroyed
or exhausted. It will lead to harmful consequences. If we can solve this problem,
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tourism
still
benefits the
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country
in general
and humans
in particular
.
In conclusion
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IELTS essay For and aganst essay about tourism

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
155 words
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