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An opinion essay: Healthy living

An opinion essay: Healthy living 7rwk5

Write your composition. From my point of view; it's a healthy life is healthy food and sports. The Diet very important for us protects us from diseases, and it prolongs our lives. Also, sports so important for us, also from my point of view; necessary for us following (Intermittent fasting) and exercises three times a week. Intermittent fasting; about fasting less time 12 hours no food just-drinks water, coffee without sugar and herbal drinks, 12 hours eating a balanced more time fasting 20 hours no food just eat 4 hours eating a balanced. The diet needs to exercise less time three times a week. It's great a program so much for me, I hope people trying the program over a long way, writing their experiences about intermittent fasting. I tried Intermittent Fasting, but I stopped. Really it's great and sees results in my life. I hope to back this program quickly time.

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 trying the program over a long way, writing their experiences about intermittent fasting.

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