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For a successful company, selling products depends more on company’s reputation or it depends more on if they provide discounts and offers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today’s world, there is high competition between companies to sell their products to the customers. To be successful in their specific field, some companies rely on creating a brand with reputation while others rely on providing discounts and offers. Building a brand with reputation to gain consumer loyalty and trust in the company’s commodity takes years of hard work while being consistent with the quality of the product. For example, popular brands like Nike and Adidas are able to gain success and have consumer loyalty and trust even though their products are comparatively expensive by providing quality products. On the other hand, smaller companies depend on product discount and offers for the sale of their products so as to build a customer base. Due to these sales and discounts customers try the products and this then leads to customer loyalty or trust in the company’s products. Sometimes during sales companies provide discounts in various forms, but still manage to keep the company in profit with an expanding customer base and increased sale. For example, if a company is advertising for a product like shampoo, they tend to give offers like getting a conditioner free or get another shampoo at half cost, etc. In my opinion, the success of a company depends on the discounts and offers that the company provides as it can also be the first step in building a brand.
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customers
. To be successful in their specific field,
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some
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companies
rely on creating a
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brand
with reputation while others rely on providing
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discounts
and offers.

Building a
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brand
with reputation to gain consumer loyalty and trust in the
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company’s
commodity takes years of
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hard
work while being consistent with the quality of the
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product
.
For example
, popular
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brands
like Nike and Adidas are able to gain success and have consumer loyalty and trust
even though
their
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products
are
comparatively
expensive by providing quality products.

On the other hand
, smaller
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companies
depend on
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product
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discount
and offers for the
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sale
of their
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products
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so as to
build a
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customer
base. Due to these
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sales
and
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discounts
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customers
try the
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products
and this then leads to
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customer
loyalty or trust in the
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company’s
products.

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sales
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provide
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discounts
in various forms,
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still
manage to
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company
in profit with an expanding
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customer
base and increased
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sale
.
For example
, if a
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company
is advertising for a
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product
like shampoo, they tend to give offers like getting a conditioner free or
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get
another shampoo at half cost, etc.

In my opinion, the success of a
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company
depends on the
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discounts
and offers that the
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company
provides as it can
also
be the
first
step in building a
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brand
.
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IELTS essay For a successful company, selling products depends more on company’s reputation or it depends more on if they provide discounts and offers.

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