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Food is very important to numerous countries

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Food is essential for our life. It is a vital for all organism to be alive on the world. There are numerous kinds of food are divide into two categories first one is healthy food and second one is unhealthy but many teenagers are like to eat fast food. So, we will mention merits and drawbacks of junk food and healthy food. First, there are several benefits of fast food is convenient, consumption of time which it has been taken less time than other one. Furthermore, Junk food is testy because artificial flavor and additives in order to attractive children and teenagers. Home food has vitamins, proteins and good carbohydrates which make us feel full for long time. For example, If some one who is ill needs a special food has rich nutrients. On other hand, the demerits of fast food than healthy one is have high calories lead to obesity for children and teenagers. It is expensive. food stalls is very unhygienic. For instance, Indian food is delicious but it have been sold on street without proper and cover. street food does not have standard quality and safety. In conclusion, I believe on last decade The fast food become part of our life and it is available and easy delivery which lead to various of children, and families consumer and can hurt their budget. So, we ought to control especially for children to keep their health on future.
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is essential for our life. It is a vital for all organism to be alive on the world. There are numerous kinds of
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food
are divide into two categories
first
one is healthy
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food
and second one is unhealthy
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teenagers
are like to eat
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food
.
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, we will mention merits and drawbacks of junk
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food
and healthy food.

First
, there are several benefits of
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fast
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is convenient, consumption of time which it has
been taken
less time than other one.
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food
is testy
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because
artificial flavor and additives in order to attractive
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children
and
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teenagers
. Home
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food
has vitamins, proteins and
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good
carbohydrates which
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make
us feel full for long time.
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some one
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has rich nutrients.

On other hand, the demerits of
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fast
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food
than healthy one is
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high calories lead to obesity for
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teenagers
. It is expensive.
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food
stalls is
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unhygienic.
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is delicious
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it
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street
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does not have standard quality and safety.

In conclusion
, I believe on last decade The
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fast
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food
become part of our life and it is available and easy delivery which lead to various of
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children
, and families consumer and can hurt their budget.
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, we ought to control
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for
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to
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keep
their health on future.
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IELTS essay Food is very important to numerous countries

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
239 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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