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I would like to congratulate the Principal, staff and stufents for the new issue of the School Magazine. It is heartening to see that the school, navigating through the storm of pandemic, endeavoured to keep the light of knowledge burning.The regular online classes, the hosting of numerous activities, the participation of students in varied activities is the testimony to the perseverance and dedication of both staff members and the students. I wish the students will touch new heights of success and glorify the name of the school.

I would like to congratulate the Principal, staff and stufents for the new issue of the School Magazine. It is heartening to see that the school, navigating through the storm of pandemic, endeavoured to keep the light of knowledge burning. The regular online classes, the hosting of numerous activities, the participation of students in varied activities is the testimony to the perseverance and dedication of both staff members and the students. I wish the students will touch new heights of success and glorify the name of the school. gYjld
I would like to congratulate the Principal, staff and stufents for the new issue of the School Magazine. It is heartening to see that the school, navigating through the storm of pandemic, endeavoured to keep the light of knowledge burning. The regular online classes, the hosting of numerous activities, the participation of students in varied activities is the testimony to the perseverance and dedication of both staff members and the students. I wish the students will touch new heights of success and glorify the name of the school.
I would like to congratulate the Principal, staff and
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for the new issue of the School Magazine. It is heartening to
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that the school, navigating through the storm of pandemic,
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the light of knowledge burning. The regular online classes, the hosting of numerous activities, the participation of students in varied activities is the testimony to the perseverance and dedication of both staff members and the students. I wish the students will touch new heights of success and glorify the name of the school.

IELTS essay I would like to congratulate the Principal, staff and stufents for the new issue of the School Magazine. It is heartening to see that the school, navigating through the storm of pandemic, endeavoured to keep the light of knowledge burning. The regular online classes, the hosting of numerous activities, the participation of students in varied activities is the testimony to the perseverance and dedication of both staff members and the students. I wish the students will touch new heights of success and glorify the name of the school.

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