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Flats and houses should be build for last long or not?

Flats and houses should be build for last long or not? bxoo6

Accommodation has became an inevitable part of an every individuals ubiquitous. Some people argues that buildings such as houses and flats need to be build long lasting while other opposite this. This essay shall discuss about the pros and cons about this and explicit my inclination. A few people states that buildings should be made quickly and cheaply. People are thinking this inorder to save time and money while a building will not last long by creating in this manner.

Accommodation has Use past participle here: "become".become
became
 an inevitable part of an every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "individual"?individual
individuals
 ubiquitous. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.argue
argues
 that buildings such as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and flats need to be build This word is normally spelled with hyphen.long-lasting
long lasting
 while other opposite this. This essay shall Did you mean simply "discuss the"? You do not need the word "about" here.discuss the
discuss about the
 pros and cons about this and explicit my inclination.

A few This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.state
states
 that buildings should be made
quickly
 and cheaply
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 are thinking this Possible spelling mistake found.in order
inorder
 to save time and money while a building will not last long by creating in this manner. 

IELTS essay Flats and houses should be build for last long or not?

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

80 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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