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fixed punishment viewpoint

fixed punishment viewpoint 9w77r

Governments and countries should define certain punishments for every particular crime. It's very important, because it warns the people, if they break a certain rule, they will face punishments. So what I think is, it's necessary to define those punishments for general situations. But we have to pay attention to details and circumstances for each person. Some people believe that the punishments should be fixed and unchangeable. For example, many Muslim people in my country think that for every murderer, the judge should consider the death penalty as their punishment. And considering the Islam point of view, I can see their mindsets and I can start to understand their perspective on this. But what I believe is that we should consider all the details before we let ourselves decide for a person's life. We should try to find the motives. As an example, if a person kills a serial killer, we shouldn't act like he is just like the person he killed! Not at all. I'm not trying to justify the fact that killing is sometimes good. I'm not saying that everybody is allowed to become a vigilante. I'm saying there should be a difference in each case. In the end, I should say that whatever I think does not matter. Rules become valuable once we as a society, all accept them. It's important to fight for justice and teach criminals some right manners. We should consider all people's views on this particular discussion and decide what to do to make our society, a better and safer place.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
Governments
 and countries should define certain You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishments
 for every particular crime. It's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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important
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because
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people
, if they break a certain This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
, they will face You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishments
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 what I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 is, it's necessary to define those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishments
 for general situations. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay attention to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 and circumstances for each person.

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Some
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people
 believe that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishments
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fixed
 and unchangeable. For example
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 Muslim This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in my country This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that for every murderer, the judge should consider the death penalty as their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishment
. And considering the Islam point of view, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 their mindsets and I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to understand their perspective on this.

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But
 what I believe is that we should consider all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
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before
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 ourselves decide for a person's life. We should try to find the motives. As an example, if a person kills a serial killer, we shouldn't act like he is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like the person he killed! Not at all. I'm not trying to justify the fact that killing is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. I'm not saying that everybody is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to become a vigilante. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm saying there should be a difference in each case.

In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, I should say that whatever I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 does not matter. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
Rules
 become valuable once we as a society, all accept them. It's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to fight for justice and teach criminals This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 right manners. We should consider all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's views on this particular discussion and decide what to do to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our society, a better and safer place. 